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You mutilate and hurt yourself
You think that no one cares
You slip into the darkness
Your skin so easily tears

There’s no such thing as a reason
You do this because you can
Cutting through your pain
You could have faced it but you ran

It doesn’t matter who you are
A cheerleader, poet or jock
Fixing it by facing this
Its so much better than being caught
©2004-2009 ~negative-reality
:iconnegative-reality:

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this is about EVERYONE who hurts themselves....please reconsider! people care..

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:iconmutedillusion:
wow. this is really powerful. i loved the rhyming sceme, you have it down brilliantly. this really brings down a powerful cause. :hug: nice job. :)
:iconnegative-reality:
thanx!!!! :hug: <<for the comment<<

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in a phrase to cut these lips, i loved you
:iconcryingdove13:
That poem like describes what I went through my sophomore year, good lord I like you!

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Cavender Is Coming.......
:icondevitears:
nice once more

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Look behind me,
What do you see???
A government,
aginst it's own people.
The media is being controlled,
What truly happened is left untold.
:iconnegative-reality:
:) thanx, i went through it in 8th grade

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in a phrase to cut these lips, i loved you
:iconxminuszero:
Interesting, and so close to the truth. One, especially a social outcast, can easily empathize with these sentiments. Seriously, who's never felt this way, at least once in their life? Besides, in life, we need pain so that the times when there isn't any are that much more precious. Nice work, experiment with new and different rhyme schemes!


:headbang:
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I can feel you on my mouth,
I can taste you on my face.
I can hear you like the holy ghost,
And KILL YOU IF YOU GET TOO CLOSE!!!
:iconjoslinlb:
I love it. Perfectly put together and very well thought out.

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November 10, 2004
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